Talk:Jeffry Brothers Pub

A good start, and nice ideas. However, I recommend you check your spelling and add a category next time you make a new article. Also, I'd avoid calling it the most famous establishment in the city like you did in the first paragraph. GeneralGoose 01:19, May 1, 2010 (UTC)

Sure thing! Didnt mean the MOST famous thing though. I'll edit that into something else. And I'll edit the mistakes where I can!

Thanks!

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A bullet is like a beautiful poem right between your eyes. 01:39, May 1, 2010 (UTC)

No prob, glad to help. May I suggest you change it to "one of the most famous drinking establishments in Rapture". By the way, don't forget to sign your posts using four tildes when on talk pages. Just makes things easier to read. :) GeneralGoose 01:29, May 1, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks, I'll remember from now on!

A bullet is like a beautiful poem right between your eyes. 01:38, May 1, 2010 (UTC)

"asked for a complex drink"

You might substitute a truley fine Single Malt which he happened to have squirreled away (and would have to scramble quite a bit to replace)

a 'complex drink' might be fine for an 'english' but would be laughed at derisively (and shunned)  by a true Scotsman.

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Add to the post Civil War period that using Scottish ingenuity  a particularly vicious molotov cocktail were made (and fueled via a basement still)   making the defense of 'survivors' effective. Fortunately, despite some nasty fights against Splicers, the brick pub survived -- ringed by an area of burnout desolation.